dark knight again...

[Gary Wilson]

following a few sugjestions... lets see how i did?


http://www.deviantart.com/view/27860023/

[Jeff Kipnis]

Looks great, Gary!

Jeff K.

[denart]

improve your hatchings/featherings and also your lineweights. :) there should be a dark to light effect on hatchings/featherings..

[Gary Wilson]

there should be a dark to light effect on hatchings/featherings..

you mean thick to thin?

[denart]

somewhat, yeah.. if you can see, the hatchings and featherings comes from blacks right, so a stroke of a hatch should be from dark to light as if your making a triangle wherein the tip of the hatch(triangle) is the lightest part and the bottom of it is the darkest part which is next to the blacks.

hope i explained it well. :)


also, yeah, thick and thins vary and depends as to where your source of light is. :)

[Gary Wilson]

thanks denart!

I havent really thought about it that much... makes a lot of sence... thanks man!
that really helps!!

Gary

[denart]

no prob. reference some of the topcow inkers, specially batt or miki. aside from them, there's mark farmer, scott williams and many more.. :)